
what is the sound of your trial by fire
is it the soft unlatching of sandals
for the sake of holy ground
only to walk the coals
lusty flames
gorging themselves
on the last of your faith
is it the escaped groan
of watching your dream slip
the long, slow fall
shattering
like broken glass under bare feet
is it the mother's staccato lament
planting the son of promise
supinated and shoeless
into the eager earth
perhaps it is the trickle of a briny bath
while hope walks away
like a fickle lover
or the silent abuse of unforgiving heat
claiming your tongue and
turning your sweet songs to vapor
maybe your cries come
a mere echo back from deaf caverns
but of this I am sure
there will be the shout of return
glorious returnlike the white wizard
full of light and power
or Lazarus unforgotten
and the deep sigh
of feeling the dewy, yielding grass
between your toes again
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beautiful
ReplyDeletethe shoes had me thinking of grass under my feet too
My goodness ... this is just overwhelmingly good!
ReplyDeletethis is terrific. and the end was just super strong. what a treat.
ReplyDeleteSimply divine -- it flows with a big deep sigh just like the dewy grass between the toes-- love that feeling...
ReplyDeleteLove this poem.
Joanny
is it the mother's staccato lament
ReplyDeleteplanting the son of promise
supinated and shoeless
into the eager earth
Ohhhhh...........
Ah, to be barefoot.
ReplyDeleteWhich, by no accident, is the brand of the wine I am currently enjoying. ;)
dang that was good...i love to walk barefoot and one day listen for that return...nicely done!
ReplyDeletethis was even better the second time through.
ReplyDeleteAmazing,beautiful...just like you! It makes me miss you even more. You truly are a writer and I can understand why you were Alyssa's favorite English teacher.
ReplyDeleteA powerful poem, Lisa. This has tones of T.S. Eliot, a tentative call for meaning in a broken world... "broken glass under bare feet, a mere echo back from deaf caverns, a Lazarus unforgotten..." Thanks for sharing this rich poem.
ReplyDeleteThat was really very deep! You are a good writer!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Lisa. I can't believe you've been sitting on this amazing talent for so long. I'm at a loss for words.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!It is deep.
ReplyDeleteGosh, this is beautiful. I adore your writing, Lisa!!
ReplyDeleteWalking the coals before that blessed grass..that's life, I guess! So good..
ReplyDeletemade my toes curl-great magpie!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
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