cast not your net for me
for I will not be gathered
under your steeple
or to your polling place
or your bed
and I will not cast
my bread
or my vote
or my garments
to be strung along
to be weighed
and counted
and forgotten
I may offer myself
a satisfying meal for a poor child
but I will never feed
your greed
or ambition
or ego
I belong to the sea
and to the caress of each wave
but I do not belong to you
I swim
in the warmth of
clear emerald
while you drown
in the cold blackness
of insatiable lust
cast not your net for me
for I will not be gathered
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Lisa:
ReplyDeleteA truly beautiful Magpie--- Your poem is a merging of collective thoughts gathering flow and energy that is a reflection of your inner world and the beauty to life's sustaining ocean.
Joanny
Challenging thought!
ReplyDeleteThis piece spoke to me on so many levels, Lisa. Brilliant and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYou used a very believeable, heartfelt fish voice to let them stand up for themselves. Soft, yet sturdy and strong - I loved it Lisa.
ReplyDelete- Dina
Cast not your net for me...I swim in the warmth of clear emerald...Powerful poem.
ReplyDeleteWOW ... powerful on so many levels! Wow!
ReplyDeleteI agree. It works on different levels...so clever and such a strong voice! I'm already memorizing it.
ReplyDeleteI love pieces like this that resound of determination! You did this brilliantly!!!
ReplyDeleteI loved the rhythm of this, very clever.
ReplyDeleteChristine
Beautiful work! Powerful words and imagery.
ReplyDeleteGood poem. It is a flowing effect.
ReplyDeleteExcellent. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteamazing. beautiful. honest. stand up and be heard.
ReplyDeleteI LOVED this.
Gorgeous, well-executed piece. You are doing good works. The world needs your voice right now.
ReplyDeleteThis really touches me..splendid independence and freedom!! Thank you...
ReplyDeleteSeriously good poem. I'm not really a poetry fan, but I liked this.
ReplyDeletereally really good stuff...the line about the meal for poor yet not feed your greed was great! wonderful magpie!
ReplyDeleteCracking piece. To the point and meaning it!
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece- not all of us have a price...perfect for these times of insane greed
ReplyDeleteA very heart-felt thanks for all of your kind thoughts and encouraging words . . . This type of writing is very new to me. It is often scary, but completely exhilarating--as I am sure you are all aware. It is such a great pleasure to be in your company and to read your creative and insightful pieces.
ReplyDeleteI love the flow of your poetry.
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You write of independence on a grand scale. Lovely!
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