Thursday, May 20, 2010

Magpie #15



cast not your net for me
for I will not be gathered
under your steeple
or to your polling place
or your bed

and I will not cast
my bread
or my vote
or my garments
to be strung along
to be weighed
and counted
and forgotten

I may offer myself
a satisfying meal for a poor child
but I will never feed
your greed
or ambition
or ego

I belong to the sea
and to the caress of each wave
but I do not belong to you

I swim
in the warmth of
clear emerald
while you drown
in the cold blackness
of insatiable lust

cast not your net for me
for I will not be gathered



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22 comments:

  1. Lisa:

    A truly beautiful Magpie--- Your poem is a merging of collective thoughts gathering flow and energy that is a reflection of your inner world and the beauty to life's sustaining ocean.

    Joanny

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  2. This piece spoke to me on so many levels, Lisa. Brilliant and beautiful.

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  3. You used a very believeable, heartfelt fish voice to let them stand up for themselves. Soft, yet sturdy and strong - I loved it Lisa.

    - Dina

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  4. Cast not your net for me...I swim in the warmth of clear emerald...Powerful poem.

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  5. WOW ... powerful on so many levels! Wow!

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  6. I agree. It works on different levels...so clever and such a strong voice! I'm already memorizing it.

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  7. I love pieces like this that resound of determination! You did this brilliantly!!!

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  8. I loved the rhythm of this, very clever.

    Christine

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  9. Beautiful work! Powerful words and imagery.

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  10. Good poem. It is a flowing effect.

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  11. Excellent. Thanks for sharing.

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  12. amazing. beautiful. honest. stand up and be heard.

    I LOVED this.

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  13. Gorgeous, well-executed piece. You are doing good works. The world needs your voice right now.

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  14. This really touches me..splendid independence and freedom!! Thank you...

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  15. Seriously good poem. I'm not really a poetry fan, but I liked this.

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  16. really really good stuff...the line about the meal for poor yet not feed your greed was great! wonderful magpie!

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  17. Cracking piece. To the point and meaning it!

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  18. Wonderful piece- not all of us have a price...perfect for these times of insane greed

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  19. A very heart-felt thanks for all of your kind thoughts and encouraging words . . . This type of writing is very new to me. It is often scary, but completely exhilarating--as I am sure you are all aware. It is such a great pleasure to be in your company and to read your creative and insightful pieces.

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  20. I love the flow of your poetry.

    www.angiemuresan.com

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  21. You write of independence on a grand scale. Lovely!

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